Build and deploy / build-and-deploy (push) Failing after 4s
Four rulings from Pouya, plus what implementing them turned up. Q58 — RULED, and he attributed the ambiguity to his own document: "3.5 was meant as the TOTAL time committed, of which 2 is preparation — leaving 1.5 hours in the room. Your arithmetic caught it: if prep sat inside, 3.5 and 7 wouldn't be exactly 2x, because preparation doesn't scale with session length." The card now reads: half day up to 3 hours of session, fee includes up to 2 hours of preparation, $2,000; full day up to 6 hours, up to 3 hours of preparation, $4,000. docs/07's own research table corroborates 3 and 6 — Patey and Zuber both publish those hours, and ADR Chambers' roster rate counts preparation separately from "up to three hours of mediation". One provenance note under R14: he recalled "all or part of 3 hours" as their wording; the committed extract carries the hours but not the phrase, so docs/07 cites the hours and attributes the phrase to nobody. Two things fell out of the ruling that the instruction did not name, and both were defects. docs/07 §All parameters confirmed was itself prescribing the flat "including 2 hours of preparation" — the sentence /for-parties/ was built against, so the spec was generating the defect. And the cap had to reach the copy: "including up to 2 hours". FEES.mediation.*.hours is corrected 3.5 -> 3 and 7 -> 6; it had no consumer in src/ while the question was open, which is the only reason no page was ever wrong. /fees/ is unblocked for step 9 on the question Q58 asked. Q57 — CLOSED with no seventh undertaking. "A reader assumes the outcome, and the obvious undertaking adds nothing a reader doesn't already infer." The TODO(pouya) is replaced by the ruling where the question was; src/ now carries zero live TODO(pouya) markers. §4's mediation row lists all six published areas. Q56's ruling had named five, which was four areas plus the word "commercial" — a scope descriptor, not a seventh area. The hedge is struck on his instruction; the clause saying the six are not the authorised subject-matter list is restored, because his ruling supplied a correct value and did not close Q35(c)'s class. Split-stamped. docs/03's compliance checklist now names what to look for on a page and which §4 row decides it, never the bar's own wording. 12 items before, 12 after — a structural fix, not a coverage change. Thirteen review findings across two rounds, all applied, none declined. Three were mine to own. The capped-form rule was written and then applied to one surface: /mediation/ shipped an uncapped form in words no barred-string grep could reach, site.ts quoted a docs/07 sentence Q58 had just deleted, and §9's Q15/Q16/Q17 row prescribed the flat form — which is what a later implementer building /fees/ reads. A derived fee term was asserted as applied fact in the document that is the authority on money: "overtime begins after 3 h and 6 h" is in no ruling. Struck, and opened as Q59. And round 2 caught the arithmetic in round 1's own fix. The full-day route is flat $4,000 until hour 6, so generalising it as 500n+1000 for all n>=3 was valid only from 6 h, and "cheaper by $500 at every length" was wrong across the whole 3-6 h band. The real spread is $2,000 at three hours narrowing to $500 from six on — up to four times larger, and largest exactly where a half-day booking overruns. Written into docs/07 §Recorded dissent and §12's R5 row, which is where the 12-month fee review will read it. Round 1's fix for the missing consequence also published the overtime rate on a page that now states an unambiguous cap, defining the trigger by adjacency with no other quantity for it to attach to; the rate came off the page. R11 at the step 6 -> 7 boundary: 13 of 14 pins current. §7's TypeScript hold named one gate and there are two — typescript-eslint requires <6.1.0, tighter than @astrojs/check, so the recorded removal trigger was unreachable. Both are now named. Verified: check 0 errors, lint 0, build 0 (14 pages), check:claims 0, npm audit 0, minifier tripwire clean, zero JS shipped, all copy present with JavaScript disabled. Lighthouse not run — tool unavailable until step 7. Co-Authored-By: Claude Opus 5 (1M context) <noreply@anthropic.com> Claude-Session: https://claude.ai/code/session_01Md3GndFqWPzK78xAoebsg5
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# 03 — Content and voice
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Authority: `AGENTS.md` §4 (claim register) and §5 (audience model).
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Source material: `PL_ADR_Personal_Branding_Strategy_Brief.docx` (2026-05-26) and
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`ADR_Site_Content_Brief_for_Claude_Design.md` (2026-05-26).
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---
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## The one rule
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**Every factual claim traces to `AGENTS.md` §4 Verified.** Read the Forbidden
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table before writing any number, statistic, or superlative. If you need a fact
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you do not have, write `TODO(pouya): <exact question>` and log it in §9. Do not
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infer, do not soften, do not carry anything over from the old site.
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### When a fact is `[unestablished]`, write around the capacity question
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**Ratified by Pouya 2026-08-28 as a reusable pattern, with the instruction that
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it will recur.** §4 records licence status as `[unestablished]` and says: *do not
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assert it, do not deny it.* Copy that addresses the question at all must
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therefore pick neither side — and the trap is that **both obvious phrasings pick
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one.**
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The worked example, which took three attempts and two audits:
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| Attempt | Copy | Why it failed |
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|---|---|---|
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| 1 | "I **do not** give legal advice" | *"Do not"* is an **election** — it implies entitlement withheld by choice. Flagged by audit 1 |
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| 2 | "I **cannot** give legal advice" | *"Cannot"* is a **denial** of capacity. Flagged by audit 2 |
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| 3 ✅ | "I act as a neutral. I do not act for a party in a matter I take, and each party should have their own legal advice." | Makes **no capacity claim at all** |
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**Both audits were right, and that is why the third version works.** Attempts 1
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and 2 are opposite answers to the same question, so flagging both is not
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inconsistency — it is the correct finding twice. Pouya: *"'do not' elects,
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'cannot' denies, and §4 says do neither. The shipped sentence makes no capacity
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claim at all — it describes the role and points the reader somewhere useful."*
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**The pattern, stated for reuse:**
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> Do not look for a *softer* way to answer the capacity question. Any word that
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> answers it — *cannot, do not, am not, is not permitted, is not qualified* —
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> takes a side of a fact this register does not hold. Instead write the sentence
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> so the question **does not arise**: state the **role**, state the
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> **consequence** for the reader, and stop.
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Three tests before shipping such a sentence. It fails if any is yes:
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1. Could a reader infer from it that he **is** entitled to do the thing?
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2. Could a reader infer from it that he is **not**?
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3. Does it contain a verb of capacity or permission attached to him at all?
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**Where this will come up next:** `/practice/` (step 5) and `/for-parties/`, both
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of which have to tell an unrepresented party what the neutral will and will not
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do for them — the exact place the "cannot" phrasing feels most natural and is
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most wrong.
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---
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## Voice
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**Restrained, precise, and unhedged.** The reader is usually a lawyer. They
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detect padding instantly and discount everything after it.
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**Do:**
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- Short declaratives. "I read the contract and the code." Not "clients benefit
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from a uniquely multidisciplinary perspective."
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- First person singular. This is a practitioner brand — "I", not "we", not "the
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practice". The old site's "we" implied a firm that does not exist.
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- Concrete nouns. *Lien claim. Change order. System Impact Assessment. Model
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card. Minutes of settlement.* Specificity is the credential.
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- Name the limits — but name the *right* ones. This bullet carried the model
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sentence *"Sole-arbitrator appointments follow the Q.Arb designation;
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co-arbitration work is available now"* until 2026-08-26. **Both halves were
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wrong and they were wrong in opposite directions**, which is why it survived
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two audits: the first half understated (sole-arbitrator appointments are
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offered **now** and are not gated by Q.Arb — §4 Offerings), and the second was
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unsourced when written. §4 now carries rows for all three forms.
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The shape of the bullet still stands, so here is a sentence that fits it and
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clears the register: *"I accept sole, party-appointed and co-arbitration
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appointments **in commercial matters**."* ⚠️ **THE SECOND SENTENCE IS STRUCK
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(2026-08-29).** It read *"The Q.Arb **pathway** commenced in August 2026;
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C.Med-Arb is the endpoint"*; Q.Arb is held, C.Med-Arb is off the site, and §4's
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paired-disclosure condition that required a second sentence at all is
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dissolved. **The limit this bullet names is now the SCOPE, not the stage** —
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which is the durable half. **"in commercial matters" is not
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optional** — every §4 Offerings arbitration row is scoped commercial, family
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arbitration has its own NOT OFFERED row, and §4's NOT-NEGOTIABLE boundary
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records the unscoped class form as the struck universal (Q39). This model
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sentence was unscoped until 2026-08-28 while the shipped page it feeds was
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scoped; found by `claims-auditor` on re-audit, one file over from the same
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defect fixed in `docs/04` earlier the same day.
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⚠️ **AND THE MEDIATION HALF IS THE OPPOSITE — Q56, ruled by Pouya 2026-08-30.
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DO NOT MIRROR THIS SCOPE ONTO MEDIATION.** The scope above exists because of a
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**legal gate**: family arbitration in Ontario requires prescribed training, so
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"in commercial matters" is load-bearing there. **Mediation has no such gate,
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§4's mediation row is unscoped on purpose.** **He mediates in all six published
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practice areas** — construction, technology, energy, insurance, shareholder,
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cross-cultural — and §4's row now enumerates them (`PRACTICE_AREAS` in
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`src/data/site.ts`), each named under **Q35(c)'s subject-matter publication
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gate**. ⚠️ **The six are the PUBLISHED areas, not the authorised
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subject-matter list, and Q35(c)'s gate is not spent by having been used six
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times.** A seventh may be named where it clears that gate.
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*(Q56's ruling had named five, which was four of the six areas plus the word
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"commercial", and this block called the list "illustrative of breadth, not a
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closed set" for one day. Pouya struck the hedge on 2026-08-31: "the register
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should match the site; 'illustrative' is a hedge covering a gap that has a
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correct value." Technology and energy are the two that were missing. The
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non-exhaustiveness clause was struck with the hedge in the same pass and
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restored the same day — his ruling supplied a correct value, it did not close
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the class.)*
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The site-wide *"Commercial Mediation"* framing was **under-describing the
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offering**, and it was corrected rather than ratified as positioning. The
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asymmetry between the two halves is designed; a later editor tidying them into
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a matching pair would be reintroducing the defect.
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⚠️ **AND DO NOT TREAT ANY LIST OF THE CORRECTED SURFACES AS COMPLETE.** Q56
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named four. The sweep that implemented it changed **thirteen shipped strings
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across five files**, and `adversarial-reviewer` then found **three more it had
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missed** — the worst on `/practice/`, where *"These describe the process the
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parties are choosing between, in commercial matters"* scoped mediation with
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the two words never appearing in the same element, so no proximity grep could
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reach it. The command, and its limit:
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```
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git grep -nEi 'commercial[^.]{0,60}mediat|mediat[^.]{0,60}commercial' -- src/
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```
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That finds the **adjacent** form only. For the split form there is no pattern —
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read every occurrence of `commercial` in `src/` and in `dist/`, and ask what
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each one is scoping.
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⚠️ **TEN LINES WERE DELETED HERE ON 2026-08-30, AND THE DELETION IS THE
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POINT.** They read *"'Pathway', never 'designation'"*, cited the **struck**
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Forbidden row as live, instructed that *"the limit being named is the stage of
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the arc, stated plainly"*, and closed *"Precision about what you cannot yet do
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makes the rest believable."* Every one of those directs an implementer to
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write the form §4 now bars — **eleven lines below this bullet's own strike
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notice**, so one bullet said both things. The Q25 shape, in the copy deck an
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implementer is told to lift verbatim. **The 2026-08-29 sweep missed it because
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`git grep -nE 'Q\.?Arb'` is line-anchored and not one of those ten lines
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contained the string.** Found by `claims-auditor` on the round-2 audit.
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(**No tribunal-secretary work** — D14 removed the rate and bars offering it;
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see `docs/07-fees.md`.)
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- Plain words over Latin. "Without prejudice" survives because it is a term of
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art; *inter alia* does not.
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**Do not:**
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- **Any claim or implication of legal licensure.** D13: the site asserts the JD
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and nothing more. Never "lawyer", "called to the bar", "licensed", "my law
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practice", "my litigation practice", "my clients", "acts for", "represents".
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Implication counts as much as assertion.
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**The approved phrasing is "active litigation exposure" or "involvement in
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litigation and ADR matters" — never "practice" in that context.** Pouya's
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wording, 2026-08-26. So: *Director of Firm Operations at a Toronto litigation
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and ADR boutique, with **active litigation exposure** across construction,
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personal injury, POA, and SABS matters.* Accurate, specific, and it claims
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nothing it should not. *(This example read "with active exposure to" until
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2026-08-28 — a **third** variant of the phrasing, three lines below the
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sentence naming the only two approved forms, in the one place where the wording
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IS the compliance. Found by `claims-auditor` on re-audit.)*
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This framing is **interim** — see `AGENTS.md` §12 R1. Raise it with Pouya
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rather than letting it settle in by default.
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- Superlatives. No "leading", "premier", "top-rated", "best". They are
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unverifiable, they read as insecure, and marketing rules for regulated
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professions treat them as suspect.
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- Outcome language that could be read as a guarantee.
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- "Passionate", "dedicated", "committed", "proven track record", "results-driven",
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"leverage", "synergy", "solutions".
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- Hedges that erase the claim. The strategy brief warns specifically against
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softening the technical claim to "technologically literate" — **the claim is
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engineering practice, so the copy says engineering practice.**
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- Em-dash-heavy rhythm and tricolon padding. One idea per sentence.
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- Second-person sales copy on counsel-facing pages. `/for-parties/` is the one
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page written to "you".
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---
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## The core positioning statement
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Reused, adapted, across the hero, the About page, and the PDF bio:
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> The dispute resolution practice of Pouya Lajevardi — a credentialed neutral
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> with active litigation exposure and a practising machine-learning and
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> infrastructure engineer. Built for commercial, construction, energy,
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> technology, and cross-cultural disputes that turn on the contract, the code,
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> the engineering documents, and the regulatory overlay around them.
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Every version of this must survive the §4 check. It does: each element is
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verified.
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**AMENDED 2026-08-27 — `AGENTS.md` Q41(b). The statement read *"disputes that
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turn on facts most neutrals take on faith: the contract…"* and the comparative
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is struck.** It was not restored, and Pouya gave two reasons, the second of
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which is the one to remember:
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> "That is an unverifiable empirical claim about other practitioners, and
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> comparative claims must be factual and verifiable. **It is also weaker copy:
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> assert his capability, not the field's incapability.** Rewrite to claim only
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> about himself — 'built for disputes that turn on the contract, the code, and
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> the engineering documents'. Same force, nothing to defend."
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So the compliance objection and the editorial objection point the same way.
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The checklist item below — *"any comparative claim is factual and verifiable"* —
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had been overridden in practice by the fact that this paragraph was **approved
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copy**, which is how an unverifiable claim ends up inside the document that
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forbids it. The approved copy is what changed.
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**This is now the ONLY sanctioned form of the statement.** Any earlier draft
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carrying the comparative is superseded, wherever it is quoted.
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## Approved headline options
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From the content brief; all three sit honestly with the practice.
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1. *A mediator who reads the contract, the code, and the room.* — **recommended.**
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The cleanest one-sentence statement of the moat, and rare because it is rare.
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2. *Engineered for the cases that don't fit a courtroom.*
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3. ~~*Disputes resolved by someone who has been on every side of one.*~~
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**Does not clear §4 as written** (flagged 2026-08-26). "Every side" asserts
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having acted as party, as counsel, and as neutral; §4 verifies the neutral
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role and *active litigation exposure*, not the other two. Left in place so
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the option is not silently re-invented — but it cannot be chosen without a §4
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row to choose it from.
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## The credential row
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Three slots, never counts:
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| Slot | Value | Label |
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| 1 | **Q.Med** | ADRIC / ADRIO designation |
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| 2 | **JD + ML** | Legal training and engineering practice |
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| 3 | **EN · FA** | Bilingual practice |
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**Slot 2's label changed on 2026-08-27 (Pouya, `AGENTS.md` Q37).** It read
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*"Law and engineering"*. His reasoning: *"The parallel was doing the implying — a
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degree and a practice under one noun. The asymmetry is the honest part."* A JD is
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a degree; engineering is a practice, and a verified one. Setting them in parallel
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invited the reader to supply the symmetry, and for "Law" the missing half is a
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licence — which D13 bars by implication as hard as by assertion. The replacement
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is longer and deliberately lopsided. Do not tidy it back into a parallel.
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**AND THE RULE IS NOT SCOPED TO THIS LABEL — `AGENTS.md` Q41(a), Pouya
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2026-08-27.** Q37 was asked about a credential label; the reasoning applies to
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every surface, prose included:
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> "Yes, Q37's reasoning reaches prose. The implication test applies everywhere,
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> not just to labels. **Prose has more room, so it is easier to satisfy: state
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> the asymmetry explicitly rather than relying on a parallel construction to
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> carry it.**"
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Read the second half carefully, because it sets a **higher** bar for prose, not
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a looser one. Deleting the parallel is only half the job — a reader can still
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supply the missing symmetry from silence. Prose has room to say which half is
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which, so it must. Naming the legal half as **training** is what makes the licence
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implication impossible rather than merely absent.
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**THE SENTENCE IS A CONSTANT, NOT COPY TO BE RETYPED** — `ASYMMETRY_LINE` in
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`src/data/site.ts`:
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> "The two halves are not the same kind of thing, and the asymmetry is the honest
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> part. A law degree on one side. A working engineering practice on the other.
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> One is training I hold. The other is work I still do."
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It lives beside `ROLE` for the reason that file gives: *"these are the two where
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the wording IS the compliance."* This paragraph previously quoted it inline and
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cited it as living at "`/`, §The approach" — and by then it had been typed into
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`/about/` too, so there were **three copies and two of them had already
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diverged**: a comma here and on `/`, full stops on `/about/`, all inside the
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session that wrote them. Consume the constant on any page that needs the
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sentence. Do not retype it, do not paraphrase it, and do not quote a variant of
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it in a spec.
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Fourth slot where the layout has one: **`Q.Arb` over `ADRIC / ADRIO designation`**
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— the label is byte-identical to the Q.Med slot's, because the two render side by
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side and any difference reads as a distinction being drawn. ⚠️ **AMENDED 2026-08-29.** It read *"Q.Arb — commenced August
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2026"*, and every stage form — "commenced", "in progress", "pathway", "not yet" —
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is now barred: Q.Arb is **held** (`AGENTS.md` §4), so a stage word understates a
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held credential. **The acquisition date is recorded in §4 and is not published.**
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**The fourth slot is no longer MANDATORY anywhere.** It was, on `/`, under §4's
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paired-disclosure condition — that page says *arbitrator* in its opening
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sentence and the stage had to appear beside the offering. The condition is
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dissolved. `/` keeps the slot because §4's substitution principle wants a fourth
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credential where the layout has one, not because anything requires it.
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The substitution principle (`AGENTS.md` §4): wherever the design wants a "how
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many", substitute a longer-arc credential. These are all true at launch and stay
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true; none grows by closing files.
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---
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## Per-page copy notes
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### Home
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Hero headline from the approved list. Positioning paragraph above. CTAs:
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*Request a consultation →* and *How I work*. The approach section makes the
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"two directions at once" argument — law and engineering converging on the same
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dispute — and keeps the infinity metaphor: *disputes are loops; the work is
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redrawing the loop into a line.* First person: "my mark", not "our mark".
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> ⚠️ **"law and engineering" IS THE STRUCK CONSTRUCTION. Do not lift this
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> sentence into copy.** The *argument* it names is Pouya's and stands; the noun
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> pair carrying it is what Q37 struck and Q41(a) extended to prose. It reached
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> the page once already, as *"Law and engineering are not blended here"* — the
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> struck parallel relocated from the credential label into body copy, one day
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> after it was struck, and strengthened by attributing both halves to him
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> personally. A spec phrase describing an argument is not approved copy.
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### About
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400–600 words of narrative, then structured credentials. Tell the three tracks
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as one arc, not three lists: a JD and active litigation exposure; a parallel
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career in machine learning and infrastructure engineering; a company run
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alongside the practice — §4's wording; "alongside both" was a concurrency claim
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the register does not make.
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⚠️ **THE CREDENTIALING ARC IS STRUCK (2026-08-29, Pouya), AND SO IS `/about/`'s
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ARC SECTION.** This paragraph required *"the credentialing pathway from Q.Med
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through Q.Arb to C.Med-Arb… stated openly, with Q.Arb described as commenced
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August 2026"*. Q.Arb is held; C.Med-Arb is off the site; there is no pathway.
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**The three-track story stays** — law, engineering, a company — because that arc
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is about his working life, not about a credential. Only the credentialing arc
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goes.
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The designation names expand as **Qualified Mediator** and **Qualified
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||
Arbitrator** — ADRIO's own forms, sourced in
|
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`docs/reference/adrio-designations.md`. *(**Chartered Med-Arbitrator** was here
|
||
too; the designation is real and stays in `AGENTS.md` §11 as a definition, but
|
||
nothing on the site names it.)* Never "Chartered Mediator-Arbitrator".
|
||
|
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Omit any section that would be empty. No "Speaking" heading until there is a
|
||
talk to list.
|
||
|
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### Mediation / Arbitration / Med-Arb
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Procedural, specific, unembellished. Name the rules. Describe the formats. State
|
||
what a party should expect to do and when. *(This closed with "On
|
||
`/arbitration/`, state the Q.Arb position in plain terms — what is available now
|
||
versus what follows designation." Struck 2026-08-29: Q.Arb is held, and nothing
|
||
follows designation.)*
|
||
|
||
`/med-arb/` addresses the procedural-fairness objection directly: the same
|
||
neutral who heard a party's confidential caucus later decides the matter. Do not
|
||
elide it. Explain the consent mechanics and when the process is inappropriate.
|
||
Meeting the strongest objection is what makes the page worth reading.
|
||
|
||
### Practice areas
|
||
Each page: dispute types, why this practice fits, what the process looks like,
|
||
and the market context that makes the area live. Context comes from the strategy
|
||
brief §III–IV — Ontario's megaproject pipeline, Bill 40 and grid connection,
|
||
~~the 2026 privacy statute~~, LAT volumes.
|
||
|
||
> ⚠️ **"THE 2026 PRIVACY STATUTE" DOES NOT EXIST. Struck rather than corrected
|
||
> in place, so the phrase is not re-invented. Checked 2026-08-29; sourced in
|
||
> `docs/reference/canada-privacy-technology.md`.**
|
||
>
|
||
> **Nothing enacted federally or in Ontario in 2025 or 2026 is a privacy
|
||
> statute.** Bill C-27 — which would have enacted the Consumer Privacy
|
||
> Protection Act and the Artificial Intelligence and Data Act — **died without
|
||
> royal assent** when the 44th Parliament's first session ended, and was never
|
||
> reinstated. **PIPEDA remains the operative federal private-sector statute**,
|
||
> and **Canada has no federal AI statute.** The nearest real thing is federal
|
||
> **Bill C-36 (45-1)**, introduced 15 June 2026, which *would* enact the
|
||
> Protecting Privacy and Consumer Data Act — a bill, at second reading, not law.
|
||
>
|
||
> **Caught before it reached a page, and only because the phrase was checked
|
||
> rather than trusted.** Same failure mode as `docs/01`'s "Model Mediation
|
||
> Rules" and the LAT gloss corrected the same day: a spec naming an instrument
|
||
> from recall, and an implementer with no reason to doubt it. **Bill 40 in the
|
||
> same sentence turned out to be real** — Bill 40 of the 44th Parliament, 1st
|
||
> Session, the *Protect Ontario by Securing Affordable Energy for Generations
|
||
> Act, 2025* — but the number alone did not establish that, because bill numbers
|
||
> are reused every parliament. Cite the parliament and session.
|
||
>
|
||
> **What `/practice/technology/` publishes instead** is the real position, and
|
||
> it is better copy than the invented one: what is in force, what died, what is
|
||
> only a bill — and the genuinely useful part for a commercial audience, that
|
||
> **no Canadian statute requires personal data to be stored in Canada.** That is
|
||
> the assumption a great many data-residency clauses are drafted against, and it
|
||
> is quoted from the Privacy Commissioner's own guidance rather than concluded
|
||
> here.
|
||
|
||
**Frame as positioning, not as history.** "Built to facilitate procurement and
|
||
subcontract disputes on Ontario's megaproject pipeline" — not "extensive
|
||
experience resolving". The first is true and forward-looking. The second is
|
||
neither.
|
||
|
||
### Process
|
||
Five steps with real timing. Say what happens if the matter does not settle —
|
||
counsel want to know the downside shape before they commit a client's day.
|
||
|
||
**AMENDED 2026-08-27 — `AGENTS.md` Q43, and it overrides this section's previous
|
||
reading.** "Real timing" was being read as *barring* the word "typical", which
|
||
is why the step-2 build shipped the five timings as bare numbers and escalated
|
||
the question instead of framing them. Pouya ruled the other way:
|
||
|
||
> "The five process timings are **service commitments, same class as Q27's
|
||
> response time** — not facts about Pouya, so they need framing, not a Verified
|
||
> row. Present them as the TYPICAL shape of an engagement, explicitly not a
|
||
> guarantee: mediation timing depends on party and counsel availability, which
|
||
> he does not control. **Published as typical, they are honest and useful;
|
||
> published as commitments, the first matter that slips makes the page false.**"
|
||
|
||
So: the **numbers do not change** — softening them was never the fix and
|
||
inventing them was never on. What "real timing" bars is a *vague* timing
|
||
("promptly", "in a matter of weeks"), not an honest statement of what the
|
||
numbers are. The framing is `PROCESS_FRAMING` in `src/data/site.ts` and it is
|
||
**not optional**: every page that renders the steps renders it, adjacent to the
|
||
numbers rather than in a section lede above them. A reader who scans the strip
|
||
and skips the lede has read a commitment.
|
||
|
||
### Fees
|
||
**Unblocked — Q4/Q14 answered, D14.** Build from the confirmed card in
|
||
`docs/07-fees.md`. Plain table, no "starting from"
|
||
evasions, no "contact for pricing" after promising a rate card.
|
||
|
||
### For parties
|
||
The one page in second person. Grade-9 reading level. Short sentences. Says
|
||
explicitly: **the mediator is a neutral and does not act for either party; each
|
||
party should have their own legal advice;** and the mediator does not decide who
|
||
is right. Answers what it costs and what happens if you do not settle.
|
||
|
||
> ⚠️ **THIS DIRECTIVE READ *"the mediator is not your lawyer and cannot give you
|
||
> legal advice"* UNTIL 2026-08-28, AND IT BREACHED D13 TWICE** — in the file that
|
||
> warns, fifty lines above, that `/for-parties/` is *"the exact place the
|
||
> 'cannot' phrasing feels most natural and is most wrong"*.
|
||
>
|
||
> 1. **"not your lawyer" presupposes lawyer status.** §4 Forbidden bars *the word
|
||
> "lawyer" used of Pouya*, and D13 treats implication as hard as assertion. A
|
||
> negation still carries the presupposition.
|
||
> 2. **"cannot give you legal advice" is attempt 2** in this file's own ratified
|
||
> table — *"a **denial** of capacity"* — and it fails test 3 and the
|
||
> compliance-checklist item, both added to this file in the same change set
|
||
> that left this line untouched.
|
||
>
|
||
> The replacement is the ratified pattern applied verbatim: **role, then
|
||
> consequence for the reader, and no verb of capacity.** Found by
|
||
> `claims-auditor` on re-audit; the original sweep did not reach this section.
|
||
|
||
### Insights
|
||
1,200–1,800 words, monthly cadence (brief §VIII). Territories from §VII:
|
||
process explainers · regulatory commentary · industry dispute commentary ·
|
||
anonymised reflections · technical explainers for lawyers · credentialing content.
|
||
|
||
Every piece links to at least one practice-area page. Anonymised reflections must
|
||
be genuinely unidentifiable — not merely name-stripped. If a matter could be
|
||
recognised by the parties to it, it does not run.
|
||
|
||
### Launch article slate (D9)
|
||
Drafted by Claude, **every word reviewed by Pouya before publication**:
|
||
|
||
1. *What the Ontario data-centre build-out means for dispute resolution* —
|
||
technology + construction; the strongest single differentiator piece.
|
||
2. *When Med-Arb is the right answer, and when it is not* — process explainer;
|
||
feeds `/med-arb/`; high search intent, thin competition.
|
||
3. *Bill 40 and grid connection: a dispute-resolution read* — regulatory
|
||
commentary; establishes the energy niche.
|
||
4. *What a System Impact Assessment actually evaluates* — technical explainer for
|
||
lawyers; the clearest demonstration of the claim the whole brand rests on.
|
||
5. *Choosing a neutral: what counsel should actually ask* — evergreen, useful,
|
||
and it makes the case for this practice without arguing for it.
|
||
|
||
---
|
||
|
||
## Compliance checklist — before any page ships
|
||
|
||
⚠️ **EVERY ITEM HERE THAT BARS SOMETHING CITES ITS `AGENTS.md` §4 ROW. IT DOES
|
||
NOT RESTATE IT — STRUCTURAL FIX, Pouya, 2026-08-31, after the third instance.**
|
||
|
||
His ruling: *"the checklist must CITE the §4 row, not restate it. Same
|
||
single-source rule as §7 and operational facts."* **This file is what gets
|
||
grepped; §4 is what is correct.** Three times a line here paraphrased a §4 row,
|
||
dropped a qualifier, and then flagged the copy a spec **requires** — *"no dollar
|
||
figures"* for §4's *"attached to **past matters**"*, which forbade the rate card
|
||
D8 commits to; *"no testimonials"* for §4's bar on endorsements **of the practice
|
||
or of Pouya**, which forbade the institutional quotations `docs/01` directs; and
|
||
the licence-capacity item, which rejected the exact sentence the section above
|
||
exists to bless. Each was caught by review, never by the checklist, and the row
|
||
was never wrong.
|
||
|
||
**So an item below names what to look for on the page, and which row decides it.
|
||
Not both halves of the rule.**
|
||
|
||
- [ ] Every factual claim appears in `AGENTS.md` §4 Verified
|
||
- [ ] **Numbers that describe the practice** — any count, rate, percentage, time
|
||
or dollar figure about matters, hours, years, or outcomes. Decided by §4
|
||
Forbidden's *counts of matters closed / hours mediated / years in ADR
|
||
practice*, *settlement rates, resolution percentages, median time to
|
||
award*, *aggregate value resolved; any dollar figure attached to past
|
||
matters*, and *named or describable past matters*. `npm run check:claims`
|
||
`counts-and-tenure` sweeps `dist/`. ⚠️ **The rate card is a different
|
||
thing and no row reaches it:** D8 commits to publishing it in full, D14
|
||
confirms the figures `[verified 2026-08-26 — Pouya]`, and `docs/01`
|
||
requires `/for-parties/` to answer *"what it costs"*. A published **price**
|
||
is an offer; a published **statistic about past matters** is what the old
|
||
site fabricated
|
||
- [ ] **Third-party voices** — decided by §4 Forbidden's *testimonials,
|
||
endorsements, quotes from counterparties*. ⚠️ **Scope is the whole
|
||
question:** that row reaches a third party praising the practice or Pouya.
|
||
It does not reach an institution quoted **about its own rules**, from a
|
||
committed source — which `docs/01` §`/med-arb/` **directs**, and which
|
||
`/mediation/`, `/arbitration/` and `/process/` all do. **Keep the source's
|
||
superlatives inside the quotation marks**
|
||
- [ ] **Superlatives and guarantee language** — decided by §4 Forbidden's
|
||
*guarantees of outcome, or superlatives*. `check:claims` `superlatives`
|
||
sweeps `dist/`
|
||
- [ ] **Licensure, asserted or implied** — decided by §4 Forbidden's two
|
||
licensure rows and D13. The second of the two is the one that catches
|
||
copy: it reaches phrasing that *implies* entitlement without saying so.
|
||
`check:claims` `licensure-of-pouya` and `acting-for-a-party` sweep `dist/`
|
||
- [ ] **The licence-capacity question answered in EITHER direction** — see *When
|
||
a fact is `[unestablished]`* above, and §4's own note that its two
|
||
licensure rows are verified **directives not to publish**, not a verified
|
||
status. Check for *cannot*, *do not*, *am not*, *not permitted*, *not
|
||
qualified* **attached to giving legal advice, practising law, or holding a
|
||
licence.** ⚠️ **The objection is to answering the capacity question, not
|
||
to the words themselves** — the approved sentence contains "do not" and
|
||
passes: *"I act as a neutral. I do not act for a party in a matter I take,
|
||
and each party should have their own legal advice."* That is **role
|
||
conduct**, which he may state freely. `check:claims` `capacity-phrasing`
|
||
sweeps `dist/`
|
||
- [ ] **Q.Arb** — decided by §4's Q.Arb Verified row and its Forbidden row. The
|
||
publishable form is `Q.Arb (ADRIC / ADRIO)`; the acquisition date is
|
||
recorded in §4 and is not published. `check:claims` `q-arb-as-a-stage`
|
||
enforces the stage words and a date near the designation, on `dist/`.
|
||
⚠️ It cannot catch a stage expressed **without naming the designation** —
|
||
the struck h1 *"Available now, and open about the stage"* matches nothing —
|
||
and that gap belongs to the cutover claims pass, not to this checklist
|
||
- [ ] **C.Med-Arb appears nowhere** — decided by §4's struck *C.Med-Arb as a
|
||
long-term designation goal* row, which carries the reasoning and the
|
||
deliberate deviation from the strategy brief. `check:claims`
|
||
`c-med-arb-struck` sweeps `dist/`
|
||
- [ ] **A firm, a team, or offices that do not exist** — §4 Forbidden rows the
|
||
specific false artefacts (*"Since 2009"*, *"sixteen years"*, the London
|
||
and New York offices, the company number, and the fictitious founder);
|
||
the general rule is **D16** — the boutique is never named, and the
|
||
publishable form is *Director of Firm Operations at a Toronto litigation
|
||
and ADR boutique*. `check:claims` `fabricated-founder` sweeps `dist/`
|
||
- [ ] Contact page states that an inquiry creates no retainer and no
|
||
mediator–party relationship
|
||
- [ ] Any comparative claim is factual and verifiable — **Q41(b), closed
|
||
2026-08-27**, which struck a comparative claim about other neutrals from
|
||
this file's own positioning statement. Pouya: *"comparative claims must be
|
||
factual and verifiable… assert his capability, not the field's
|
||
incapability."*
|
||
- [ ] Abbreviations expanded on §11 Glossary's authority only — and expansions
|
||
for the five ADR designations checked against
|
||
`docs/reference/adrio-designations.md`, not from memory. "Chartered
|
||
**Med**-Arbitrator", never "Mediator-Arbitrator"
|